perfectly done, and it doesn't feel too dragged out. There's a lot of pressure in electronic type music to get to 3 mins but I think this works really well at this length. however the vocals are kind of jarring when they first come on.
perfectly done, and it doesn't feel too dragged out. There's a lot of pressure in electronic type music to get to 3 mins but I think this works really well at this length. however the vocals are kind of jarring when they first come on.
The more instrumental parts sound awesome! and the more electronic parts sound good too. Elements never really come out of nowhere which I really like
always liked this type of stuff!
Thanks ;D
I like this, but it feels so minor it isn't really scary anymore. When writing melodies in minor write a lot of just like you would a major piece so when it gets more minor it sticks out. Also the atmosphere is great!
Thanks for the helpful feedback, I don't have much experience with melodies yet so I'm still improving; I'll keep that tip in mind!
I like this, nothing wrong with making someone work for the most energetic part. The only thing that needs to be changed is the vocals in my opinion. The other stuff sounds good on its own.
did my best to sing in tune
It doesn't sound bad at all, a bit grainy but it seems intentional and works
hi ordeal, thank you so much for taking your time to listen and also send me some feedback.
Pretty near perfect perfecting mixing, the only issue is there isn't any choppy/staccato elements that are really noticeable besides drums. So it feels kind of watery
I appreciate your feedback bro. Ill keep that in mind
This is really good, but I was kind of expecting at least some dark undertones or a slower tempo.
this is really good but when making a video game soundtrack it can sound weird if you start working without a clear idea of when and were the song would play in a game.
hey!
first of all, thanks for the review, i really appreciate it :)
i see what you mean in terms of writing a video game soundtrack
however, that's not really what ive been trying to do with any of my songs :p
now that you say that, i am (hopefully) gonna start a new game project shortly, so im probably gonna have to work on it a little bit
but yeah, thanks once again for your review, it means a hell of a lot :)
- jack
the drums and flute are amazing! what program do you use?
Thank you! This was made in MuseScore 3, using the special soundfont GeneralUser v.471 :)
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